Elinor

Hi there! I really liked this. As your title points out, this is short and sweet, which is one of my favorite types of poetry. Your flow and word choice ...

Hi there! This was a neat poem. I thought the line breaks were interesting, and they help enforce your decrepit subject matter. As Sionmara said, this was twisted. As much ...

Oh, I'm sorry for the misunderstanding. Maybe you can add a little bit of specific info, because the terms you use are very general and could apply to both a ...

Hiya Inferno! I would just like to say that I love your avatar. It's a good picture. Anyway, welcome to YWS! I also really enjoy the Hunger Games-in fact it's ...

Hi Firearris! This was certainly much better then The Cricket , which I think was the last poem I'd reviewed of yours up until now. What do I like about ...

Hi! These weren't that bad. They could use some work, but hey, you were in sixth grade. The second through fourth haiku were really good, and I just have a ...

Hi! This was a pretty good poem, and your words seem to describe my feelings for this poem; It was definitely very sweet. First things first; your poem could definitely ...

Hi there. This was interesting poem; I enjoyed the concept and the fresh ideas, and the repetition of "This shot" made it seem all the more spooky. However, this poem ...

Hi there! Before I begin the review, I just have a quick note. You have six literary works posted and zero reviews. I'll review this you once, but please try ...

Congratulations, Ben! *throws confetti*

Hi there fixed! First off, I just want to give you kudos for resizing your image so I don't have to scroll through it and have it stretch out my ...

Hi Madeline, and welcome to YWS! How do you like it so far? Germany, eh? Although I am American, I have German roots. So hey, feel free to PM me ...

Hey there! It's awesome that you're so enthusiastic about YWS. Believe me, you've come to the right place. When I joined nearly nine months ago, I was a terrible writer ...

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Yeah, it is. :( I suppose you can try , which is another good site. It runs through yahoo, which has an age limit of thirteen, I think. I haven't ...