Elinor

I'll join, but can I be a pretty?

Hey guys. I've removed this and I'm getting it locked so I can take all your suggestions into account-there's going to be a lot changing in this story, so thanks!

Ha, you're probably right. :P

Hi there! This was pretty good. I liked your first one a lot better, though. While the color scheme and style of the dress is nice on this one, it ...

:cry: I hope this all gets sorted out!

p.p.s. ~ Elinor Brynn, it was Cheshire cat, Alice and the WHITE RABBIT. Oh, sorry, hehe. For some reason I blanked about the white rabbit and thought, "Who is a ...

Hi there, La! Welcome to YWS. I read through this poem twice, and I thought it was pretty good. Your subject matter was original, and is definitely one of my ...

Hi Demi! Wow. These are really good. I read through about the first half and skimmed the rest, and I am amazed at the talent in these haiku. My favorite ...

Hmm, I don't see a bump option-just, "subscribe" and "bookmark"

Hi SnoM! Welcome to YWS! I hope you have a magnificent time. If you would like to request reviews, go to Will Review for Food , do not do that ...

Hi Alex! Welcome to YWS. PM me if you have questions, or if you need a review. -Elinor

Jenna, wow. I really like this. Who knew you were so fantastic at drawing? What I like most of all is your line work, especially on the girl's (is that ...

Hi Hippie! A haiku, eh? I like haiku; they are short, sweet and when done well, excellent story tellers. How did yours fare? I thought it was okay. It tackled ...

Heh, I like these. The first one especially; is it the Cherise Cat, the March Hare, and Alice? You've got a nice drawing style; it's on the realistic edge but ...

Hi Timmy! I just had a few comments. ^^ She sat there with her legs dangling over the edge You might want to mention the legs belong to her and ...