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Re: Ashes to Ashes DT (Applications closed!)
I'll just say that it's definitely going to be interesting. :D
Mar 14, 2010 -
Re: Ashes to Ashes
Cara Although she kept telling herself that it was impossible, Cara was convinced that she'd seen the necklace before. But where? She just needed time to study it a bit ...
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Re: Alissa's Mark
Alissa I felt like smiling. My son was so grown, so confident. "It's good to see you again," I say softly. "Why don't you inform the others? I want to ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: Is Losing Okay?
Hiya! This going to be hard to critique, lol, because there was so little wrong that I saw it. It's a nice, persuasive essay that I agree with 100%. I ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: Statue Man
Hi there! This was a cute poem-I liked it. Your simple imagery and word choice create the perfect mood for this poem. However, for all the strong points that it ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: They Paved the Way
Hello there, and welcome to YWS! This piece needs some work. Just because this is a poem does not mean that it does need punctuation. Also, your subject matter seemed ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: Down the Rabbit Hole
Hi there! This was a nice poem, but there were definetly a few things. It seems as you rushed through this poem and gave it little thought, because there are ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: Durrie's butterfly gallery!
Hi again, Durrie! Nice! This is another great piece of work, but it definitely isn't on par with your other work. This one seems a bit too busy. You've got ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: Ashes to Ashes
(OOC: Is there anything specific the item should be? Or is it up to me? I'm assuming it's not Cara's stuff...)
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: Ashes to Ashes
Cara Rose-Miller Cara sighed, looking back at Ambrose. Oh, Great , she thought, This should go well . He was probably still holding a grudge against her for the way ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Ashes to Ashes
Cara Rose-Miller "Thank you," she said quietly, calming down a little bit. "You have no idea how much that stuff means to me. And we could encounter anything out there. ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Computer Generated Imagery DT
Name: Briar Aaron Age: 28 Gender: Female Appearance: Briar, at five feet, seven inches tall, has long, wavy tresses of auburn hair. Her wide eyes are dark gray in color, ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: YWS Has An Online Book Store
ballerina13: Please no more recommendations at this point. I'm still trying to catch up with the ones already made!
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Computer Generated Imagery
Premise Computer Generated Imagery, or GGI, revolutionized the art of film-making when it was created. Special effects could be created without much hard work, fantasy and sci-fi movies were no ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Computer Generated Imagery DT
This is the discussion and application thread for the CGI DT. I will be taking applications for the storybook until March 22nd, which is next Monday. I can't guarantee that ...
Mar 12, 2010
