Elinor

Hi there! I agree with Ben about cropping a bit of the excess out of this picture, but otherwise, it's really nice. The black and white compliments the photo perfectly, ...

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: That's the funniest thing ever.

I agree with whoever said that this could have been prose. It's a fairly decent poem, but it's twelve stanzas long and we don't get that much insight into the ...

Hi there! In addition to what Suzanne said-I agree with it 100%-I just have a a few comments. You've got a start to this poem, and I can see that ...

Hi CreativeFreak! This was a very good poem! It was well put together, and I liked the premise. It's something that seems to be discussed in our everyday world. However, ...

Cara Rose-Miller Cara stomped her foot, angry at the others. There didn't have to be anything inside the locket, did there? Because she remembered where it came from now, the ...

It's basically in the future where the physical element of films is gone and everything is made out of CGI-but no one can tell. As a result, millions of actors ...

Hey there. I agree with Ben-it seemed a little too expected. Although it's a nice, true piece, it's got nothing we haven't heard before. I thought the fact that it ...

Hi Romeyo. This poem wasn't very good. The message you're trying to get across is sweet, but my main problem lied in these lines: U DO... BE GRATEFUL! First off, ...

Hi there! I had a few things. :arrow: This photo should be re-sized. It's not as outlandishly huge as some photos that I've seen, but it still stretches off the ...

Name: Elinor Age: 13 Personality: A bit whiny and impatient, but well meaning and active, always giving people helpful advice and chatting. Physical Description: Very short - 5'0 - with ...

Madeleine Grey from Into the Depths here. It took me an hour just to figure out how to post this. I wandered in a strange store when I came across ...

Hi there! This was an alright drawing. I agree with what Kitty said about the girl's neck being too long, but her hair kind of seems messed up. Why are ...

I agree with everything said so far-including not making her Egyptian, but to me, she always came across as a mischievous girl. So why don't we give her a more ...

I just looked over everything and it all looks great. Storybooks seems like a much more dynamic and important part of the site now! :D I think it would be ...