Elinor

Hey Leyla! This was a really nice story, and I liked the overall feel of it. I don't really have much to say here, because people already all got the ...

Cara Rose-Miller She was, of course, oblivious to what was going on, simply regarding the loudness as just obnoxious behavior. She was completely in another world, lying down on tracing ...

Hiya there! I really liked this poem-it was nice, especially for your first attempt. However, I've see you've made the amateur mistake of not adding punctuation. If you get really ...

Hi Yoha! Ooh, this was a nice poem. It was short and sweet, with nice imagery, and you use a fresh, original concept-just the kind of poem that pleases me. ...

Hi there Azumi! A nice picture, but there was just one thing! Either get a scanner or try to cut the excess out of the photo. It's very distracting, and ...

Haha, I've heard of these "iPods" before. Apparently they music in them! How is that? I kept looking around to see If I could find a singer or an orchestra, ...

Hi there. I'm not sure that I liked this too much. The subject as matter, as 'terrible' as it may seem, is actually quite annoying poetry cliche. Everyone's heard the ...

Hello there, herzing. This poem was not very good. It was lacking it almost all aspects; the grammar/punctuation, imagery, word choice, and the storytelling aspect. Your subject matter is cliche ...

You are definitely taking the risk by posting your work on here, and it's definitely a common concern. You should definitely be safe, though. We've got a strict policy against ...

Elinor She laughed. "Where do you want to work?" Elinor asked softly. "I've had enough trouble today in the literary forums. Would you like to hang out at my profile? ...

Hi Mo! I just had a few quick notes before you set off to revise again. I really liked this. Your background is simply lovely, like something out of antique ...

Hi Meghan! I actually really like this; you've got some nice talent that I really envy! Your shading is terrific, and I admire your ability to draw lips, which is ...

Elinor Elinor was having quite a fine time in the blogging section. She'd just finished typing up another exhausting entry, while checking the entries of others. She'd visited it a ...

Hi shubhi! This was just, well okay. It's a nice start, but you're making a lot of amateur mistakes, and people have most already commented on those. I did, however, ...

Hi fixed! This seemed like an original and creative poem. I quite liked it-I would place it along with other gold poetry I've read here on YWS. Unlike the other ...