Elinor

Hi again! Another great poem. It definitely took a different approach then the first poem. The feel and imagery of this poem is just fantastic. One thing I could comment ...

Hey there! I liked this poem. It right about the perfect length, and the verses had a nice lyrical rhythm. It was very to catchy to read, but there were ...

Hi Miss Rose! This was a nice poem. I will admit that I was a little click on this poem when I saw your title, as I, like many others, ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS! Congratulations on writing your first non-rhyming poem! It can be a difficult challenge, can't it? Well, skimming through your poem, I'll say that you ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I think I'll have to agree with silented1 about the repetition. There are some cases in which I think it works to the benefit of ...

Hi David! Welcome to YWS! I'll say, this poem was very nice. It kind of reminded me of the old, short version of the epic poems you would see in ...

I've extended the deadline to next Monday so more people can have the opportunity to join this storybook. We need a minimum of two more people; filmmakers, please.

The garden is different, drier somehow. Flowers once vibrant now seem to be dead. The roses have wilted; they cannot wilt more. I can't do anything now; A long time ...

Hi Dasia! I'll say that I agree with Suzanne about finding a title. Titles may not be everything in a piece, but they do help give the reader/reviewer a solid ...

Hiya Grin! Let's just say I'm impressed with you trying to tackle a villanelle; they're very hard to do, and you did quite a nice job! Like BenFranks said, it ...

I've never seen Spirited Away , so I thought I'd do a quick image search, and all things considered, I think the picture looks pretty nice! You've got good, clean ...

Aww, Ben! This is an adorable piece of poetry. I love your imagery; it's very vivid. This poem does get a bit sappy at times, but it all adds to ...

Hello Clo! Like the others, I was very much impressed with this poem. This isn't one of my favorite poems on YWS, it's one of my favorite poems of all ...

Cara Rose-Miller She was alive, but very weak. With each passing moment she grew more so, moaning and wincing in pain. She managed to look up and notice the bugs ...

As a hardcore fan of Cinderella, I will tell you know that I was quite impressed with this poem. You've got such vivid imagery, and when I read it, it ...