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Hi Princess! This poem was really, really good. If you didn't have your note at the beginning, I'd still be able to tell that you put a lot of work ...

Hi Bailey! This poem was bad. What do I mean by that? Well, your rhyming is inconsistent, doesn't really make sense, and it just seems like you've added it in ...

Premise Welcome to the 23rd Winter Olympic Games. It's 2018, and whether you're a first time Olympian or you're a veteran fifth-timer, it's undeniable that the scenery of Annecy, France ...

Hi there! This was nice, especially for a first attempt. I agree with pretty much everything that Kamas said. Poems have layers. Right now what you've written seems like a ...

Hi there! I shall critique this provided that you do the following: Please separate this into stanzas. It's extremely hard to read and understand as a big block of text, ...

Hello! This was a nice poem. It was simple and cute; there isn't really much else to say about it. One thing I don't like is your repetition of 'As ...

This sounds like it would be really cool! I already have an idea for an article I want to write. Just a question. Will YWS News come out it separate ...

Cara Rose-Miller Cara dreamed that she was on a white-sand beach with Sam. They were laying down next to each other on a large towel, their hands interlocked. It was ...

Hi David! I just want to say that I really, really liked this. It seemed like a genuine medieval poem. It was beautiful, and the soft imagery and your use ...

Hi again Carly! This was a nice drawing-the girl is really pretty. I love the wide eyes and hair and the way you drew her-these seems like your likeness of ...

Hi Kylan! This was a nice poem. I love your vivid yet simple imagery, and the lovely way I felt after reading this poem. It was refreshing, and I love ...

Hello there Carly! First off, I love the picture. You've got magnificent shading and this picture has real depth to it. You can draw your eyes and lips very well, ...

Also they'll probably write some sort of note, like, "Moved to Action-Adventure Fiction" or something like that.

Jason Ridley "Well, I think you're the most beautiful woman I've ever met," Jason said, running a finger through thick blonde hair. He'd seen her at the bar and then ...

Hi Lavender! While it's nice to see that this doesn't stretch out my browser and that you've taken the initiative to re-size this photo, it's way too small. It's definitely ...