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  • General Articles Re: Ghosts?

    Hey there Nike. I just want to say that for the most part I agree with Ben. This reads like an incomplete thought or framework for something larger, not a ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Gollum inside

    Hi Em! I didn't you know were a fan of Lord of the Rings! It's a pretty cool series, isn't it? Anyway, your poem. It wasn't bad, but it wasn't ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Swords Crawler-A Drawing

    Hey there! This was definitely something different. I'm not sure about the quality of the picture as a whole. Partially because of the rough shading and smudges around your paper, ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: End of days

    Hi bluecows! This poem is nice. I liked the feel of it, and that you've taken a commonly used idea for poetry, and made it your own. It had a ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Badges Review: Good or Bad?

    By the way, I agree with everything Jiggity and OverEasy said. To what Kitty15 said, there are people who are nominated that don't meet the technical criteria for certain things. ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Questions and Answers Re: I locked a story of mine, but now I can't unlock it

    Just contact a mod and they will be able to unlock it for you. ;)

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Archive Re: Murder at the Olympic Games

    Can you guys please take this to PM? ;)

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Badges Review: Good or Bad?

    I don't know. It mostly feels the same, with a few additional things I like. For instance, I like that those who excel in storybooks can now get recognized, and ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Archive Re: Murder at the Olympic Games

    Um, okay!

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sunny Day

    Bailey, please. If this was a joke, why did you post it on YWS? Why didn't you note something in the original post? I don't think I believe you, because ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Your Spiderman

    Hey there! Being an avid fan of Spiderman, I will say that I wasn't disappointed. You seemed to capture Spiderman/Peter Parker dual life perfectly. I loved your imagery and the ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Coicane.

    Hi Patatopie. This was an interesting poem, and it covers a very dark subject matter. 1. VOICE The voice in your poem almost seems as if this is coming from ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sulphur

    Hi Kammie! I really liked this poem; your imagery was just breathtaking. It was short and to the point, which is something that I really like in poetry. Nothing really ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: My Back Yard

    Wow, Knightley! This is really nice. I love how you got the sunlight shining in the photo, although it does seem a bit fake, if you know what I mean? ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Other Re: Deleted

    Hi Power! Is English your first language? If it is, I'm surprised, because you seem to be making a lot of silly grammatical errors. like not putting spaces between commas ...

    Mar 21, 2010


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