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Also, if you have pre-set characters, you may want to leave a short description of each so people who chose to be pre-set characters have an idea of what they're ...

Hi there! I don't really think that the repetition of 'A true friend' suits the poem. Since it occurs on every (really short) line, it clogs down the flow and ...

Hey KitKat! The punctuation in your dialogue is also completely wrong, so look at that article Hannah gave you. This also needs to much longer; the piece is flat, the ...

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Hi Aristotle! This was a pretty silly poem, but the rhythm felt really off. Like Hannah said, you're not limited to what you can write just because this came from ...

I come tumbling down, falling in the world of upside down. The journey down this hole's been harsh, and abstract to say the least. Everyone is mad, and flowers talk ...

So, we'll start this once we get 1-2 more people! About the people who were offering for their characters to be killed, I think I will just have Ariadne die ...

And by the way, could I still join?

Hi Kat! These are very pretty. Are those candles? Anyway, I like the low angels and simple backdrop of this photo, as it makes you feel like you're in an ...

Hi Stori. This seems like it needs a lot of work, and that it needs to be much, much longer. You've got so many ideas and interesting thoughts in the ...

Scarlett! I never knew that you were such a good poet. Everything is positively amazing in this poem-the imagery, the word choice, the flow, the theme. I'm sorry that I ...

Hey Princess! I really liked this. It was catchy and original, a breath of fresh air from the other poems that I've been critiquing recently. However, I just wanted to ...

Hi crescent! I just want to say that this was a nice piece, and I can tell that you put a lot of effort into it. Your imagery was simply ...

Hey there! This was nice for a first attempt, but I wasn't quite sure what it was about! It seemed kind of vague, like you were just meshing words together ...

What do you mean? The little titles we write underneath our names? You just go to My YWS > Profile Settings and scroll down, you should see the custom title, ...