Elinor

What, no Alice? I call the White Queen then.

Hehe, you have an insane taste in films. Alice in Wonderland is where it's at! Anyway, please be sure to PM me if you need a review or have any ...

Okay! I suppose we can start this and get a few more to join later. Ariadne The view from Annecy was anything unlike Ariadne had ever seen. She loved the ...

Kamas & Silented1

Jenthura! I loved these. They're positively adorable, and I loved the little captions in the pictures, but the text seems kind of hard to read, perhaps you could type them? ...

Hi Jessy! I don't believe we've met! I'm Elinor! Anyway, to your poem. It was nice, and I absolutely adored the imagery that you used. However, your focus in this ...

Whoa! Sammi! I had no idea you could draw so well. I'm jealous! I agree with the others that the nose seems a little big, though, but that shouldn't be ...

Hey, this was nice, but I really couldn't see anything in it that related to a telephone call. It all seemed to be just about listening to recordings. I also ...

Hi Scarlett! This was very nice. It was strong in all areas, but there was one minor thing that I didn't like. It had to deal with a line that ...

Hi Seana, and welcome to YWS! This poem has potential; the word choice and imagery were excellent, but that seems overshadowed by bad grammar, a lack of proofreading, and an ...

Hi! This was a nice poem, and it was sad too. I'll say that while a lot of poems have an emotional center to them here on YWS, there are ...

Hehe, this was nice. I think you captured the style of a villanelle nicely, rhyming and repeating without it seeming too forced. It's not the greatest villanelle ever though, as ...

Hiya! First, songs about love have been done before. There are so many that it's practically its own genre, and a lot of it is unoriginal, like yours. What can ...

Heya. This needs some work. First off, you're switching tenses; it starts off in past and then goes to present, which is pretty confusing. I also didn't like the general ...

Hi Zenjoy! This was nice, but I can't really imagine it as a song. It seemed a bit all over the place and there wasn't anything that could have me ...