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If Mo. posts a bio, we'll need one more. If not, two.

Hey Sarah! Eeh. Not too crazy about this one. It's got potential, but it really needs a lot of polishing before it gets to final draft quality. Right now it's ...

Cara Rose-Miller Although she was in too much pain to move, Cara could hear the details of the conversation perfectly. She wished that she could contribute something. But she found ...

Hey Pacific! Well, as the poem stands, it's good, for a first draft, that is. You've got some lovely description in here, but this poem did have an unfocused, gritty ...

We can! The reason I didn't start it is that not enough people joined, but if you would like to go ahead and post a profile-for a filmmaker, if you ...

I'm crazy like Jabber and going to do both.

Ariadne "Merci," she said quietly as she exited the car, handing the taxi driver the money she owed him for the ride. The Olympic Village looked fantastic. It wasn't so ...

Jason Ridley Jason felt somewhat uncomfortable with Captain Delrey staring at him as they edged through the territory. On top of that, he was just bored. He remembered the girl ...

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Hi! In addition to what June and Hero have said, there was something about this poem that struck as very bland. There is practically no imagery, your word choice is ...

Hey Jared! This certainly wasn't bad. You've got a nice, interesting style, and I'll be eager to review part two once I'm finished. I loved all the characters and the ...

Hi Skins! Wow, this was in a slush puppy? It's really hard to tell, and it certainly isn't bad. You've angled the picture so perfectly that the light hits the ...

Hi, FMS! Welcome to YWS! How do you like this site so far, and what kind of stuff do you like to write? Are you more of a poetry person, ...

Cara Rose-Miller Cara turned in her cot and tried with all of her strength to get up. As soon as she heard Cassie speak about another attack, she had a ...

Hi Rubber! Do you mind if I call you that? Anyway, it's awesome that you were able to return to YWS. How do you like the new YWS? Be sure ...