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Bolt, you realize that Nate is over two times my age? xD

Thanks A.M. Would anyone like to start this? I really don't.

Hey Forest, This was okay. You had nice solid writing and described the Gollum character well. However, I felt this was lacking, somewhat. You mostly talked about his appearance and ...

Cara Rose-Miller Cara didn't like it one bit. It was one thing to see a dead body, but it was another thing to see someone actually die. And she was ...

April 3 - White Linen Soft, Silken, Clean; Dries on a cord in the backyard, waiting to be dry. To wear or keep us comfortable, White Linen will always be ...

Cara Rose-Miller Cara began to shift uncomfortably. Why was Amp taking so long? She'd liked taking to him earlier and felt somewhat warm. In addition, she hadn't got the opportunity ...

Hey Gal! Thought I'd drop by and give you a review. Anyway, I really liked this. This piece had strong imagery and it made me feel good when it was ...

Hey Madi! Welcome to YWS! We met briefly chat, and now I'm here to review. I'll say now that this wasn't that good. It seemed a little bit flat, and ...

Wait, didn't Amp just go inside? fix'd.

Cara Rose-Miller Cara finally found the strength to get up, and she ran over to Kelsey. "I'm so sorry that you had to see that, honey," she said sympathetically. "Are ...

Eh, not a fan of this one. It seemed a bit too rough, like you rushed through it or something. This was a nice idea, and you've got some good ...

April 2nd Thorns - So beautiful, Yet so horrific; They poke and prod, drawing blood; we can only admire beauty from a distance.

Cara Rose-Miller Cara listened to Amp's conversation with Kelsey in disgust. Amp was lying. He thought that she deserved it, that he would have actually hit her had he not ...

Hi Jenthura! This just seems like you got a really cool image in your mind and that this was just a test to see how well you could describe it. ...

Hi Biffle, I felt like I had a shortage of breath while reading this story. It seems incomplete to me, in a way. There were also several things that bothered ...