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Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
I'm not the best person to answer that, DayDreams. Those kinds of questions are better directed at a moderator, who has either a light or dark green name.
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Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
It's alright dear. The question has come up many times before, but rest assured, you are safe.
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: The International Space Station
Name: Helen Watson Age: 28 Gender: Female Occupation on the ISS: Scientist Family: None Appearance: About 5'4, with pale, vanilla-like skin. She has wide, violet-tinted eyes and dark brown, shoulder ...
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Re: Summer Nerf Wars
Don't be embarrassed. Things like this happen all the time. ;)
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Summer Nerf Wars
I still need to post my profile!
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: The International Space Station
Spot saved for a female scientist.
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Re: Rain Petals - Elinor's NaPo
April 4th - Puzzles A certain pattern To be melded together; Difficult to solve.
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Re: Ashes to Ashes
Cara Rose-Miller Cara choked back tears. A year ago she wouldn't have been able to talk about him. His name had accidentally slipped, so now Cara felt compelled. She closed ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Submission Call For YWS News!
I just submitted an article. :D
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: The Night is Early Yet
Hiya Heather! I couldn't really tell what this was about. It had a lot of pretty imagery and rhythm to it, but it felt kind of disjointed and had a ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Happiness! Rainbows! Furniture...?
Nice! It was hilarious I love how this felt like a genuine children story. No real critique here, but the line below should be in present tense. Oh, my house ...
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Re: -deleted for the time being-
Hmm, then maybe what you could do is put this in third person. What's happening right now is that I'm trying not to sympathize with the main character, but I ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: -deleted for the time being-
Olli, I'm going to be honest with you. Your first version was better. This one kind of just read like a badly cut, disjointed mess. I thought having one scene ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Summer Nerf Wars
Spot Saved for Hawk Girl [Age 17]
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Re: short poem
Hey! I just had a few comments. First, this needs to be punctuated. Right now it's got very little, almost done, and it makes no sense. Right now the only ...
Apr 4, 2010
