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Re: Fully Alive
Hi, I don't like this. You ended where the conflict was beginning. I can tell you tried to have an emotional center, but I just kinda thought, "Oh, poor her," ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Pirate (first two chapters, revised)
Being the author of a novel-in-progress about pirates, I was curious to see where this story would lead. I will say that I was fairly disappointed. 1. PROLOGUE maybe 3 ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Mark of love
Hey, Elf! Here it is, upon request. First, I want to start off by wondering why authors of poetry seem to think that their poetry is one long sentence or ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: ho hum.
Okay, so! There were a few a things that I wanted to talk to you about. The first thing is your grammar and punctuation. You need to have punctuation in ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Two possible minor changes to the header?
I actually like the new order. It's cool that YWS news has its own category.
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Two possible minor changes to the header?
I just wanted to say that I agree. It forms a nice separation between the header and the site.
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Rain Petals - Elinor's NaPo
April 8th - Peanut Butter Cups Decadent Candy; Creamy Peanut Butter and rich chocolate.
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Cloud 9 DT (Applications closed!)
Name Erika Maureen Lily Estimated Age 27 Gender Female Appearance Personality She is loud and eccentric, often speaking her mind and not thinking it situations of importance. She's adventurous and ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Wonderland
The White Queen She laughed and looked at Alice. "I'm assuming you're going to be bigger so you can have conversations with us without being intimidated, dear? Also so your ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Summer Nerf Wars
Eris Lyre She laughed. "It's a long story, honey," she whispered, getting a paintball gun from a moderator which she had ordered when her first signed up for camp. "I ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Summer Nerf Wars
Eris Lyre Eris, who had just taken a sip of coffee, patted Krystal on the back. "Ready for training today?" She asked, pulling her hair back into a ponytail. She ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Two possible minor changes to the header?
Eh, I like the way the links are ordered, but I'd be fine with moving it above the header.
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Make me....I dare you
Hey, Hope. Could you do this one for me? It's in other fiction.
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: You Know You Want Some [re-opened]
Hey Demeter! Can you take a look at Medusa for me? It's in other fiction.
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Medusa
Some said that the girl had beauty parallel to Aphrodite. Others on Olympus regarded her as polite, fine young woman. Her corn-silk, shoulder length hair smelled of lavender, and her ...
Apr 7, 2010