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Hey Fizza! Welcome to YWS! Glad you could join us. What kind of music do you like to listen to? Ha, don't worry about having a favorite genre! I like ...

Hey! This was just okay. I can't really tell where it's headed, though. It just seemed like a story of teenage angst where you shove your views about money are ...

Hey kook! I like this poem about the Boston Tea Party. It had a nice ring to it, and it was funny. I just had a few comments. On the ...

Hey! I apologize in advance if the review is so short, but I only have one minor qualm. Your attempt to build suspense in this part is...failed, for the most ...

Hey! I'll say that it would be really hard to write an emotional and engaging story with compelling characters in six paragraphs, and I respect you for even attempting it. ...

Err, I don't know where to begin with this. First, this doesn't really make much sense. I know it's not really supposed to, that this should just be a random ...

April 10 Countdown of a Bomb - C locks center around them O blivious to the outside world. U topia is far from the place with the ticking bomb N ...

Hey Smex, This was alright. I thought it was cute, but I think you need to add to a paragraph or so talking about specifically what these two girls have ...

Hey Amanda! Welcome to YWS. You're going to love it here! I think I like you. We seem to have a lot in common; we're both thirteen, and both like ...

You are a god and a visionary. *likes*

Hey. I'm really sorry that your horse died. It always pains me when cute little animals die or are in pain. But hey, he's in a better place and I'm ...

Hey! Sorry if this a little late, but here is your review, as requested! 1. NITPICKS I imagined all sorts of scenarios. This part redundant as you imply that the ...

April 9th - Sick in Bed Confined to linen sheets; out of school for the day. you cough and blow your nose, and can barely say a word. Cheap entertainment ...