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Hey, Zoray! As a standalone story, this really didn't do much for me. It just seemed like a cliché fight scene with a cliché follow-up and a corny ending. James ...

Yes. If they're just being downright mean, you should report it.

Hey Fizza, and welcome to YWS! Remember me from your welcome thread? ;) Okay, so! This was okay. It needs to be cleaned up a little, but I definitely think ...

This is so dang cool. :D

Hey firelight, and welcome to YWS! I don't think the repetition here really does you any good. Sometimes repetition can work, but here it's just mundane and really bogs done ...

What happened? Your other poem was so good and this It's cliché from the very beginning and not as touching as I think it should be. Poems about love and ...

Hey! I liked this. It's really tough to write a villanelle, but I think you handled it quite nicely. It follows a compelling storyline, and the idea seems original and ...

April 11 - The Undiscovered Village Sitting on a hilltop, Far from the main roads, There's a village of people. People who live primitively And don't know what technology means. ...

Hey Dreamy. I didn't enjoy this. It felt distant and choppy, like you had a bunch of random ideas and/or visions and decided to incorporate them into a story. The ...

Hey Amy! I'm just going to point out a few nitpick-y things that bothered me, then give my overall thoughts on each picture, okay? Blue - I don't like that ...

No! That was my original intent but only 8 people joined.

Whether you’ve written a story, poem, or created a piece of artwork, the time and effort that you’ve dedicated to working on a piece is something that you want to ...

Daisa, this forum is for posting YOUR artwork. If you did not do these, they are better off in your blog.

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You feel moist air and raindrops on your arms. The gentle breeze calms you. You smell salt in the air and drink ice-cold cola. The solitude makes you feel complete. ...