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Re: Walking Dead
Hi! Kyosuke...this was amazing. It was seriously what I needed to pick up my day. Your imagery is surreal and brilliant, and I can really feel like I'm there, ash ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: The Harp
My first attempt at writing poetry without punctuation or grammar. The Harp beautiful plucked strings calm audiences for some it's the prettiest music they heard they're amazed that the soothing ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: The Life of a Shadow Thief - Part 1
Hi Kammie! So, I really liked this. It was compelling, and I liked the cross between fantasy and historical fiction that this piece seemed to have. Your characters were wonderful, ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: Rain Petals - Elinor's NaPo
(My first attempt at a poem without punctuation or grammar) April 16th - The Harp the beautiful plucked strings entertain audiences night after night the soft rhythmic melody is played ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: Cloud 9, a Steampunk Storybook.
Erika Lily She ascended to the agonizing steps toward the top level. She no longer had any idea what she wanted or why she she was going where she was ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: Answers to Questions Everyone Has
Now you can center and right align next, so you might want to add something about that. I'll leave it below in code so you can just copy/paste. :D [center]center[/center] ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: Cloud 9, a Steampunk Storybook.
Erika Lily Saying goodbye was never easy. Now that Erika was 27, she was moving out of her adoptive father's house. One could argue that Erika should left several years ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: i wonder
Hi Kyllorac! I'll say I rather liked this. I usually yell at people when they don't have punctuation or grammar purposefully, but you did it purposefully, and well. The lack ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: The Neon Sign
Hi! This felt like it was a little unfocused. In seven stanzas, I can't tell why you wanted to write this, or why the neon sign is synonymous with love, ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: Rain Petals - Elinor's NaPo
April 15 - Academy Award A tiny golden statuette given to those who excel film. We watch on our tv screens each night, hoping they will pick our favorites.
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: I feel really stupid asking this...
Here lies the answer you seek . I'll see if I can get a mod to move this for you. ;)
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: Am I wrong about this?
Before I begin, I just had a quick note. If you're doing an acrostic poem and your word is actually more then one word, there should be spaces between them. ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: The Reality Dream
Err...no. Sorry, but I can't really say that I liked this story. It was uninteresting because there was no conflict to it. It was just about a girl who started ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: What I Hear
Hi Ari! So, It's good to see you posting poetry again! I always thought that you had fair talent. When you first joined, you had amazing poetry that gave off ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: swords rust
Expanding on what Forestqueen said, before you write poetry, you should read it and study it so you know to write it properly. The same can be said for any ...
Apr 15, 2010
