Elinor

Hi! Okay, so, whenever you're trying a new form of art, it's best to understand basic formatting to what you're writing. Just by looking this I can tell you've never ...

Thanks for the advice, everyone! I've removed the story and I'm going to go ahead and lock it while I'll edit. Then I'll re-post it once it's revised.

Hi! So, I liked this. Within such a short amount of time, you capture the setting and the characters really well. However, I think that this could be a little ...

April 21st - The Notebook the blank notebook; blue lines upon white paper guiding where to write. so formulaic, sometimes we doodle. sometimes we write our stories.

Removed for editing.

Hi Teddy! So, this was cute. I like how your narrator is all scared and that, and your simple, flat imagery I adored. However, I think I wanted to like ...

April 20 - The Pink of White Glittering pastel like that of silk and flowers make a pretty rose.

OOC: Sorry guys, but I forgot to mention in the PM that I sent you that I wanted the entries to be in journal format. This means first person, third ...

Jabberhut is a legend and a half.

Okay! So I've decided to close applications, and after a lot of thought and consideration, I've decided who got picked and who didn't. Keep in mind that it wasn't an ...

Hi! So, I'm not quite sure why you posted this if it's a few years old. Do you want to recycle the idea? Are you just comparing what you wrote ...

Callie She had never felt more embarrassed before in her life. How could Charizard have backed out on her like that, right when she most needed him? She sat down ...

Hi! Sorry that this is going to be a short review, but there was only one minor thing that irked me. Okay, so I'm not sure what to think about ...

*EDITED*

Callie "Alright," Callie said calmly, "Let's do this!" Since her Vaporeon was already out of the pokeball, she brought her forward. This should be easy, Callie thought. Evolved vs. Un-evolved. ...