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Hi! I'm torn on what to think about this poem. It's definitely a good one on all levels, but I don't really think it was specific This is for your ...

Hi! Aww, this was so adorable. It may have been a little cheesy, but it's all good. I can really tell that the narrator loves this girl that this poem ...

Hi! I really liked this poem. You had a nice, simple and catchy rhyme scheme! I notice in a lot poems that rhymes seem forced, like the author only rhymes ...

Hi! Oh my goodness, this is beautiful! It looks so polished, almost like you could slap this character on a TV or a page and she'd be part of a ...

April 25th - Lace Intricate lacework on a dress or a headband or even a bag. lace in the pattern of flowers see-through. usually white, but sometimes multicolored Very beautiful, ...

Hi. Talk about rushed. I know that this was supposed to be amusing, but I didn't crack a laugh when I read this at all. It seems really out of ...

Hi! Okay, so I didn't really like this. Is it supposed to be an entire short film or a scene in a story? I'm confused. This was lacking story wise. ...

Allie Brown, Day 2 May 8th, 7:23 PM Smith just woke up a while ago, and he tells me that he thinks that there is another person on board-a stowaway ...

Hi! So, I really liked this poem. I wasn't familiar with Elizabeth Báthory, so I read her Wikipedia profile, and I'll say that you definitely captured her life well! Your ...

Hi! This is pretty good, but I had one little problem with it, and that lies with your imagery! It's very tell-y. For instance, you mention that the place is ...

Hi! Do you have a webcam, or even just a video camera? Tape yourself singing it, and then upload it to YouTube! Then you can post it along with your ...

Hi! I think I like these. Well, they're okay. Not bad, but I know that you could certainly do a lot better. Well, with both your photos, I want to ...

Hi! Okay, so I admit that I really liked this poem. Your rhythm and rhyme scheme were both good, and your simple word choice and imagery told exactly what they ...

Hi! So, this was okay. I appreciate what you're trying to do by making us aware but drugs and all of that, but there wasn't anything particularly memorable in this ...

Name: Queen Elisabeth III (Elisabeth Ferring) Age: 19 Gender: Female Species: Faerie Appearance: She has pale, cream-colored skin with a curved, hourglass figure. Her complexion is somewhat rosy, and