Elinor

Hi Mochi! So, I really have to give you kudos for trying to draw roses! That intricate petal design makes it tricky, doesn't it? I've tried and tried to draw ...

Erika "Oh, I don't know!" said Erika, trying to be quiet. "Maybe I was out late and my home is now abandoned?" Jack shook with disapproval. "It sounds a bit ...

Where's the picture? ;)

April 26th - The Golden Girl she had a job with a corrupt man when she meets a handsome man, she can't resist his touch she kisses him and enjoys ...

Hi King! Here is your review, as requested. So, I liked this. I don't think that it's as good as the other poems of yours that I've reviewed, but, it ...

Hi! So, I really liked this poem and the moral it presents. You've got a nice subtly in your poetry; you enforce the moral so it's clear enough for us ...

Hi! I think you've gotten to a really good start, but I definitely think the drawing a rich, primal quality to it. For starters, you should always make sure that ...

Hey, King! I think I remember reviewing another poem of yours where this hadn't been broken up into stanzas. It's good to see you've made an effort to improve upon ...

Hi! One thing that I really feel the need to comment on is your sentence structure. It's poorly executed, and while the story itself is good, it gets really frustrating ...

Hi! Is this a prologue? If so, it will probably need to be moved to Action/Adventure novels. You can contact a mod (someone with a light or dark green name) ...

Hi! Hmm, I don't really like this. First of all, it needs to proofread. You have a lot of silly mistakes like forgetting letters, spaces, and not capitalizing i's that ...

Hi! So, I don't know to critique this, exactly. It's obviously unfinished and I can't really see where it's leading. Your writing style is somewhat dreary, and this reads like ...

Hi JD. This was really sweet. I'm literally holding back tears right now. I can tell you loved this girl. She sounds like a really sweet girl, and I feel ...

Ranger, you look like a model!

Hi! Oh, I really like it. I think you've got the shading and the outline work nicely. The hair and the eyes really stand out a lot! I think you ...