Elinor

Hi! Okay, so, I think you've got a really good start with this. There are a few things that I like, like the shading and the general shape of the ...

I call a spot for a tough girl who has to work to prove she's just as good as the guys. :D

Erika Lily Erika wasn't mad at Jack. Rather, she was angry at herself for letting her curiosity get the best of her and wandering up here. She had jumped at ...

Hi! Don't get rid of the words. They're just fine and really sweet, and besides, I like the cool layered effect that the text gives it. For future reference, though, ...

Hi there! So, I think I like this. I like where you're going with it, but right now it looks like a rough skeleton for something that could be a ...

Or you could just not log in. That way if you ever decide to return to YWS, you'll still have your account and won't have to start over from scratch.

April 28th - The Wind Silent, always there. It blows against us in heat or rain. Mostly hated, a form of power. The wind is a wonder.

Erika Lily "Well," said Erika softly, "I'm looking for my mother...but..." She faded, beginning to shake with nervousness as she realized that she didn't know her mother's true first name. ...

Hi! No critiques? That's a shame, because this piece is rather well-written. Oh, and one tiny thing before I start the critique, okay? You should only have titles in all ...

Not right off the bat, no. You should be active in the welcome forum and reply to the posts of new members and try to make them feel welcome. But ...

Allie Brown, Day 2 May 8th, 6:24 PM I guess you could say that I feel somewhat sorry for the stowaway, thief, whatever he is. He keeps pleading that he's ...

The beautiful girl with the white-blonde hair, the one in the black bikini: she works for a corrupt man. That didn't stop the handsome man from coming near He changed ...

April 27th - The Eye beautiful and colored on the outside hidden by lush eyelashes it gives us sight. So complex yet so simple you wonder how it does those ...

Hey, Sammi! How are you? I told you I'd review these, now here I am. I like your style, and I think you feel really comfortable working with this medium. ...

Hi, crescent! So, I really like these. I did want to make one note about your pictures as a whole. Why can I see parts of the table and the ...