Elinor

Hi JD! Well, I want to say that I really liked this. It was a sweet, and cute. I just love the descriptions and scenery that you create with your ...

Hi! So, a few things. If you hadn't requested me to do this story, I probably still would have found it and reviewed it. Why? The title really drew me ...

Hi! So, I think this was a bit better then your first poem that I reviewed, but you still fell into a lot of the same problems. There are two ...

Hi! Before I mention anything further, I notice you've been here for almost two weeks and have done 0 reviews. You may have commented on some works, but they have ...

Hi! This was alright, and I like the idea behind it! However, the poem seems overall a bit too choppy, especially in the first couple of stanzas. When I read ...

(Oh my goodness, I can't believe NaPoWriMo is over already! I had so much fun doing it.) April 30th - all's well that ends well a revered line from Shakespeare ...

Hi! Okay, so is this supposed to be a script? If it is, you've got the format totally off. This article should be able to help you out. If it's ...

Okay, first of all, this isn't in the right place. An announcement like this should be made in the Lounge. Secondly, if I'm not mistaken, you should have to have ...

Hi there! Hmm, this was an interesting poem, and I'm not quite sure what to think of it. It's certainly good-you have a nice rhythm and flow-but the subject matter ...

*Do you want me just to RP the King for this scene, then?*

Hi dante, and welcome to YWS! I think I saw you in chat earlier, but we never really talked, so hello! My name is Elinor, so feel free to PM ...

I got my hair cut today. :D

April 29th - Hunger I'm starving and craving some food maybe a coke and some biscuits too? Or how about a milkshake all rich and chocolate-y. And some pasta too. ...

Name: Miranda Black Age: 24 Gender: Female Species: Human Appearance: She's tan, with chocolate-y brown hair and hazel eyes. She's tall; 5'7, and has a slim, athletic figure. Picture: Personality ...

Hi! So, I agree with everything that Jas and Ari have said so far, but I just wanted to expand on that comment. Poetry has certain, complex, three dimensional quality. ...