Elinor

Sure! Just PM me when you do. ;)

Hi Kit! So, I'm really torn as to what my general thoughts on this piece are. There were a few things I liked, and a few things I didn't like. ...

Hi! To be honest with you, this poem left me quite confused. I couldn't really understand what it is about and what new knowledge you wanted the reader to walk ...

Hi! I'm not going to lie; I really, really liked this poem. I think that it had a nice flow to it, and the rhythm is extremely catchy. Your simple, ...

I think I know why this piece doesn't have any critiques. It's way too long of a piece for reviewers to trudge through and analyze. You should probably keep your ...

Hey Hope! Can you look at this one for me?

all's well that ends well a revered line from Shakespeare it's very, very true. sometimes you get sad that your favorite event is over, but keep the memories of it ...

Hi! You wrote this when you were 8 ?!! Dang, it's quite impressive. You wrote better poetry then I do now. I think it's quite a sweet bit of poetry! ...

Hi! So, so far, I agree with everything Snoink and shubhi have said so far, but I just wanted to add something to that. If you think grammar isn't really ...

Well, this was my first year doing it, and I thought it was going to be really easy, but it was hard. Even if my poems weren't the greatest, there ...

Hi Jolene, and welcome to YWS! Awesome you could join the site! Could we know a little bit more about you? For instance, what are your favorite genres? Do you ...

Hi, Gladius! So, being a girl who has never played a Zelda game (I've only seen parts of them!) but is a great fan of the story and the character, ...

Hi! So, I think it quite like this. In so few words, you manage to create powerful characters and a memorable and simple story, which I think is really nice. ...

Hi there! Alright, well, to add to what Navita just said, the subject you've chosen is easy to right about but hard to write well. It pops up often in ...

Hi! Okay, so, I think you need to listen to Navita. She's given you really good advice, but I just wanted to add something to that. Even if this meant ...