Elinor

Hi! So, I think I felt a little cheated when reading this poem. This is simply because it could be so much better, be filled with so much more detail ...

BondGirl007 and AlizaYazdani requested that I review their works via chat. So, I'm going to get to them and any other requests will be right after.

Hi Ease! So, I'm really not quite sure what to tell you. First and foremost, you need to skip a new line whenever a new person speaks. It's an age ...

Hi! Hmm, I'm not quite sure about this story. It's definitely cute, and the idea is nice, but I didn't really think of much of the execution (the actual way ...

Hi! So, I read this story two times through, and the first thing I could think of was, "this needs to be proofread!" You've got all kinds of silly grammar ...

The smell of sweat and alcohol breath from too much beer seemed to get stronger with each minute that Amelia played. Between her turns, she would always glance over at ...

Sure! Just post in the thread below and I'll get right to it. :)

grew

Banned for commenting on his avatar.

I'm totally the fountain of youth. QFT. Haha

Done!

Hi Sammi! As requested. So, I really like this poem. It's got an interesting, original idea to it, and some of your poetry is just beautiful. I especially love this ...

*Okay, I'm confused as to what to post. I read through the posts of the against the new court people, but I'm afraid I'll get something wrong. Also, should you ...

I know right. And they make it really hard for new members, too. I tried joining that site a while ago. I lasted about 2 days? lol. Well, here is ...

Ah, silly FictionPress. :P I think you'll like it here a lot better. Drop me a PM if you ever need a review or just want to talk, okay? I'm ...