Elinor

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No, I don't have any allergies, sorry. Maybe if you asked around at school or even here I bet you could find someone to talk to. :D

I'm done, everyone! My queue is empty right now, so I'd love some more requests!

Hey Teddy! So, I don't really know what to think about this story. I thought the idea was good, and I'm excited to see more entries in this, because right ...

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Hi Sionamara! I didn't enjoy this. The idea was interesting, but the execution wasn't very good. It was too short and the pace was all clunky. It's deserving of something ...

*I'll just pretend I've been recently recruited* Karine Karine was lying against the wall, vaguely listening to the conversation between Kayla and Parker. She hadn't been a member of the ...

Hi Hope! Sorry that this critique is so late! Anyway, I'm not quite sure what to think of this. It seems like more of a song to me, so I'm ...

Hi! Hmm, this is an interesting piece-an interesting idea about our daily lives. Since allergies are very common in our daily lives, a story like this would require a lot ...

Jason Ridley Claren seemed awfully quiet; too quiet for someone who had just received the promotion of a lifetime. How Jason would kill to have that position! Claren didn't really ...

Hi! So, this poem! It's definitely cute for what it is, and humorous at that. I only had one tiny nitpick, as there isn't much I can say without you ...

Hi! As requested. Before I get into the details of the review, I just want to mention something little about the formatting. You should divide into stanzas. Poems can sometimes ...

Very funny.

Hi Aliza! Sorry this was kind of late, but here we go with the review. I just want to mention something about the formatting of this piece. Since it's all ...

Hi! These are really good, but I want to mention something specific about the nature of the photos before I get to the actual critique. If you don't have a ...