Elinor

Hi! This was a nice picture. I loved the abstract way that it was presented and the random things you drew and how they all complimented each other. I just ...

Whipping

Banned for banning people more then once.

Hi, Unworst! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay. Now, I'm going to say that I used to write a lot of things like this prologue when I ...

Thanks for your advice, untalented! However, this is really old, and I've moved on from this drawing. While I value your advice, I'd rather you critique things that have posted ...

Hi again Jorge! So, I just wanted to expand upon the comment that Chupastosa made earlier and that have been made in your previous stories. You may think that proper ...

That means you have been a member of Big Brother and have left that squad honorably. A lot of times these people are no longer active on the site but ...

5/10 Cute but a little plain.

Done!

Hi Sionamara! How are you? As requested. Now, this poem was by all means very cute. I think you've created something that almost everyone can relate to-a cute right of ...

Hi, Isha! So, I just had a quick comment about your background. The image of the monster itself is lovely, but you know what I think would really bring it ...

Hey King! How are you doing? I think you've got a good start to this. The idea is nice. My problem is that it just seems really rushed and you ...

Hi, Write! So, I think I quite liked this poem. I can definitely relate to it and how the main character feels a lot. This has touched me on a ...

Hi jorge! I see you've just joined YWS, so welcome! How are you enjoying it so far? One thing I see is that this is just a little flash-fiction, so ...

Hi! I'll have to say that I agree with Tenyo. While this piece has potential, it's annoying because you literally shove the message in our heads. A good science fiction ...