Elinor

I'm going to have to mention Twelve and Thirteen , the second and third books in a trilogy by Lauren Myracle, the woman who wrote those chatroom books. There's a ...

And the box could be locked! And the monster could be holding the key! =O He, I'm liking this idea more and more.

Hi Maddie! Welcome to YWS! I can understand your feeling of intimidation. A lot of new members feel that way when we first join! No worries, though. After a bit ...

Hi! Interesting. Is this supposed to be a prologue of sorts? It's very short and I don't know exactly how I critique this by itself. We're given no introduction to ...

Hey Evi! What's up? I'm going to do what I did for Demeter and do a line-by-line critique of this and then give my general thoughts at the end, alright? ...

Banned for finding water on mars.

Evi -> It did, but I thought you said at the beginning that Lora was the narrator's older sister. I must have just misread.

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Hi Demeter! How are you? I'm going to try things a little differently and give this a line by line critique, okay? Mostly because this a little long and it's ...

AN: This is a songfic with the italicized portions being lyrics from Beyond the Laughing Sky , a deleted song from Disney's Alice in Wonderland that was later used in ...

Yup! You do. However, if you already have a yahoo account, Flickr , which is another image hosting site, operates through Yahoo, so you could just sign in with your ...

Hi Fire! What's up? So, this story. I didn't really like it. Even though it's really short, there isn't much that goes on within this story. Two [I don't even ...

Banned for taking note of his star count.

Hi Evi! So, since you've been so helpful to me for the past few days, I thought I'd return your favor by critiquing this story. Now, I didn't really like ...

Pancakes.