Elinor

Hiya! I'm a little torn on what I think my overall view of this story should be. The idea is nice, but it's pretty skeleton-like in the sense that you ...

Yep! I'll have been here for a whole year starting next month. The Notebook was okay. I don't really like any Nicholas Sparks books-but A Walk to Remember was an ...

Hi Turquoise! Welcome to YWS! How are you enjoying it so far? Hehe, I'm a hopeless romantic as well. Sometimes it can be really cheesy, sudden, and uncomfortable, but when ...

8/10 Cool and abstract but not very stimulating.

Hi there! So, is this supposed to be for Suzanne's contest? If so, then I wish you the best of luck! I don't know what feel or theme you were ...

Hi! So, I think my main problem with this poem is that it feels dry and bare. This is because you barely have any imagery or any kind of words ...

Oh my goodness, I love it! It's not what I would have thought of, but it's still awesome. :D Copy please?

I really like the third one.

Hi! So, I see that you just joined YWS! Welcome! How are you enjoying it so far? Anyway, to your story! For one, I'm a little confused as to why ...

Hehe, almost! There's no e at the end. Anyway, here's the link to my guide: Drop me a PM once it's resized and I'll be more then happy to review ...

Hi! To me, it seems like this story could be so much more then what it's at right now. You start off with an interesting premise, but you don't go ...

Hi! I saw your blog post-welcome back to YWS! I hope it's every bit as good as it was when you left it. Anyway, the story. It's really too early ...

Hi! Elfwriter, what I can tell you right now is that this story is filled with a ton of wasted potential. It starts off with an interesting ideas and characters, ...

I completely agree. This a thread for nominating people who feel have made lasting contributions to YWS, not just your friends. EDIT: By the way, here's what the original post ...

Hi, Jorge! I've seen you made some attempts to improve your spelling and grammar, and that's good. However, you could still do a lot better. One major rule you're missing ...