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Hi Jungle! So, I read this once, twice, three times, and with each read-through, I kept thinking, 'Wait a minute, what? Slow down!' You barely introduce Jessica's character, tell (not ...

Hey! I'm glad you appreciated the review. Anyway, the thing was that I wasn't sure. You mention "a lot happening", "all that we'd been through" and such, and it didn't ...

Hi Words! How are you? I see that you just joined YWS a few days ago-how are you liking it so far? Anyway, I quite like the idea behind the ...

Hi BrokenWing! So, I quite liked the story. Like Tenyo, I think that you did a really good job at capturing the emotion and atmosphere, especially in so short of ...

Wanna get your first blue star on a story of mine, Sammi?

Act 2: The Battle with Perseus “Lord Zeus, I don’t know if I can do what you ask.” Athena, the goddess of wisdom, and Zeus, the lord of the skies, ...

Hi Rulani! I didn't enjoy this piece. It didn't flat out suck, as the scene with the paper was amusing and entertaining. However, I just found your narrative confusing and ...

Hi, carden! Because you're a fantastic reviewer and active new member, I'm going to review this. Well, I liked it. A lot. It seems like the quality of works on ...

Hi! So, I'll have to agree with KitxKat and Carden. They both brought up excellent points that I just want to expand upon a little bit more, but I won't ...

One word: AWESOME. Edit: When we receive a nomination for a badge, will we be notified?

6/10 Kinda Blurry

Hi! So, I'm not quite sure what this felt like. It didn't feel very non-fiction like because you don't really describe anything particular that's happened to you or something that's ...

Hey Ras! So, here's a helpful hint for posting artwork in the future. Did you know that you could put images into your posts? If you do that, it'll make ...

Hi! So, this was okay. It's definitely better then a few of the things that I have read in the past couple of days, but I still think that It ...

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