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Re: Answers to Questions Everyone Has
Also, Kammie, you might want to update your link at the end of the post to the new nominations thing.
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Aliens *Edited*
Hi! So, I want to wish you the best of luck in the contest! It should be an exciting, fun challenge. Since this is the first page of your story, ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [5]
Banned because the girl in your avatar isn't a Disney Princess.
May 16, 2010 -
Re: milk
Hiya! I liked this piece. It was definitely adorable, and I can tell how you factored the assignment you were given into writing this, especially when relating milk to your ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: The Lovers
Hiya! So, my thoughts on this story are a bit mixed. Your writing is good and very solid, but what it seems like to me is that you were pushing ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Frog Legs
Hi! So, I really liked this piece. It was a breath of fresh air after some of the absolutely atrocious works that I've critiqued recently. When did you write this, ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: the smelly cat
Hiya. Jorge, having followed the stories that you have posted since you first joined, I'm astonished by the little thought and consideration that you've put into your works. In all ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: sorry
Hi! So, like Kaedee, I'm a little confused. This doesn't really resemble a direct narrative in any way, and I don't know why you wrote it to include in the ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: A Horse Lovers Tradgedy
Hiya! So, I don't know what it is, but the formatting is off on this. Did you, by any chance, click 'poem' instead of 'story' for the formatting options below ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Match Maker
AquaMarine and Jenthura
May 16, 2010 -
Re: coping
Hiya! So, I'm going to say that I agree with Hope for the most part, but I just wanted to expand upon the points that she made, okay? Show and ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Nominations Area Makeover
Okay, thanks. That helps.
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Nominations Area Makeover
Question: I just got five nominations for the badge, but none of them were reviewer II, JMs, or mods. If they back it up before they approve me, can I ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: My Perfect Morning
Hi Ziggy! How are you? It kind of sucks that that happened, but hey, it can to of all us at one point or another, no matter how good we ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Equinox-- A Story I Hope to Start Soon
Hi! Hmm, I'm not exactly sure what you're looking for in the critique, so I'm just going to give my general thoughts on where I think the plot could go ...
May 15, 2010
