Elinor

Hiya, Just a tip before I begin the review: these photos are a little big. While it's nice that you've put them in spoilers so they don't stretch out the ...

Hiya, So, first things first. Whenever you post a piece on YWS, you should never, ever leave it as just 'untitled', 'my story', or something bland like that. When someone ...

Name Daniel Kleinman Age Eighteen Gender Male Appearance Daniel is 5'9, with deeply tanned skin. His unkempt hair is light brown that has been dyed blonde at the tips. He ...

Hiya, I don't know what you're trying to accomplish with this piece. It's definitely not prose, but even calling it a poem would be stretching it. You just list facts ...

Hiya, So, I didn't want to like this poem but somehow it sort of rubbed off on me. Maybe it has to do with the rhyme scheme? It's extraordinarily catchy ...

Can we create second characters?

Hi Adrian! That's a lovely name, by the way. I've always fancied boy names that are common but not too plain or flat. Do you have any projects that you're ...

When will you pick the winner? ^-^

This island is a prison; a trick has led me here. The gates around the entrance and the fences with electric zap taunt us; a reminder that we can never ...

Hey all, I made a Star Wars RP site if anyone wants to check it out. Pm me with questions. Here's the link:

Name Calina 'Callie' Anne Walker Age Fifteen Gender Female District 1 Appearance Callie is about five feet tall, and has thick, wavy brown hair with golden highlights. She has wide, ...

Hiya, So I remember critiquing this about two months ago, and when I saw this up I was quite excited to see that you had made corrections on this. I ...

Hiya, So, I like what you're trying to get at with this, and I like what I think that this could become. However, right now it just falls a little ...

Hiya, So, I wanted to like this poem. I really did. However, it somehow just fell flat. I'm not going to lie; you did have lovely imagery and description that ...

Aurora "Who are Meeko and Flit?" Aurora asked. She was stopped when she saw a raccoon and humming bird. "You like the animals. I love them too. Nature is a ...