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Hey Ben! Could you review The Land of the Faeries for me? It's a new poem I've just posted under Narrative Poetry. :) Thanks much!

The land of the faeries is a pastel dream of purple and pink each food is a delicacy from moon-juice to pink-sugar toast; no one goes hungry everyone's happy and ...

The poetry, fiction, and literary misc forums should be for your actual work. So, if you were to post the entirety of this story or post it chapter-by-chapter, it could ...

For having 26 reviews.

Hiya, You have gotten many good critiques on this poem so I'm not going to repeat any points that were made. I was very confused, and while your explanation cleared ...

Griffinkeeper and Evi. Don't ask. :lol:

Everyone: Posted with Erika starting to be a little suspicious of Raine. In it, I have her wonder if the CIA is going to try to recruit her again--what do ...

Erika Lily-Team Alpha The Bunker They were about to take Erika outside to talk to her when the man came rushing through the door. It had all happened so fast--the ...

For being British. ;)

7/10 Cool!

Hiya, I really like this. It was very chilling, and your imagery throughout the piece was wonderful. I can imagine this sitting on the bookshelves of places like Barnes & ...

Hiya! I love Pocahontas. The Disney movie was cool, and since I took American History last year, it was interesting to learn how inaccurate the movie was. ;) What are ...

10/10 It's really awesome. ^^

Hiya, There were some humorous bits to the piece, but overall it just struck me as somewhat flat.The premise you've set us up with is not very exciting. Dating is ...