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Re: Harley Quinn
Hiya, Doesn't Harley Quinn wear a red and black joker's costume? I'm confused. Anyway, this was pretty good. I can definitely see the potential is there and you're starting to ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: I Thought
Hiya, I'm really sorry that something like this had to happen to you. Going through a similar experience myself, I understand how you must feel. That being said, I'm so-so ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: The Arrow Wielder (Prologue)
Hiya, Indifference; that's my feeling toward this story. I don't hate it, as your writing is pretty solid (aside from a few grammatical errors here and there). However, what leaves ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Review Day July 2010 Check-In Thread
Two so far!
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Cat Steps Chapter 1: Draft
Hiya, Kyllorac and Stella have made wonderful points so I'll try not to tread on them too much. I want to like this story so, so much. You have a ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: haiku for the shipwrecked
Hiya, I'll start off by saying that this is really clever. I love how you've split it up into three parts; something about that just seems to make sense. I ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
I posted these on facebook, but I thought I'd post two of my favorites here. These were from my camping trip last month! We got tired on our nature hike ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: We need your writing ...
:)
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: Thunderstorms at the Beach
The sky is gray, overcast with clouds. the air is salty and damp; there is a cool breeze which hits your arms as you sit alone on the beach (drinking ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: Review Day July 2010 Check-In Thread
I'm aiming for 15.
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: whaaaaaaaaaat?
Hi Moon! Welcome to YWS! I must say, you have a really cool username. It's fun to say. :) Well Sol pretty much got the basics! Do you have any ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Three Letters
Hiya, This is a really cute poem and I absolutley adore how simplistic it is. It's one of those poems that is really touching despite not going into too much ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: 7. Outdated (part 1)
Hiya, Short review today. I'm not sure what to think about this story. My immediate reaction to this is both that of admiration and shock. You start of this story ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted! You eventually get married, but it ends in divorce. I wish I could get the lead role in the school play.
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: Apparently, I write like Stephanie Meyer.
I wouldn't worry about it! It's just a generator--it's results aren't going to be 100% accurate. If you look here you'll notice some people got different authors for different parts ...
Jul 21, 2010
