Elinor

Hiya, So, I think you have a lot of good in this story. I really like the structure and style and what you want to do with the characters. When ...

Hi, Bib! You're from India? One of my best friends was born and lived there for a time. I've never been to Singapore, but it does sound like an awesome ...

Hiya, This is a nice piece. I love how you build up suspense and tension throughout, and some of your word choice and sentence structure is just lovely. However, what ...

Hi, Nathalie! You're from the Netherlands, eh? That's cool--I've always wanted to visit there. I'm part dutch on my mom's side. I'll say, your English is fantastic. Do you have ...

Hiya, As a writer, you need to show the reader that you sincerely care about what you're writing. I don't feel that I get that out of you. There's a ...

Just be patient and wait; requests will come eventually.

I guess it just depends on what kind of story you want to tell. Is it a superhero story or a story of someone who can just read minds? If ...

Hiya, So there are a lot of things I really like and a lot of things that I really don't like about this story. It's definitely very sweet and a ...

Hiya, Super! I really like your avatar--it's cute. I used to have an account on deviantART but I think I got bored of it in a week or so. It ...

I'll definitely see if I can do NaNo this year, provided I can come up with some good ideas. I have a lot of ideas floating around but they're mostly ...

Hey! Can you do this one for me? Thanks much. ^^

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Sun-RayGirl

Hi, Outrage, and welcome! Tell us a little bit about yourself--do you have any favorite authors or books? Do you prefer prose or poetry? Any stories or poems that you're ...

Hi, Forest! So, I just had a few comments. First, I just wanted to say that the general idea and emotion you put into this piece is done well. I ...