Elinor

I like it! It will definitely will make everything nicer. Also, I second Rosey's question about the generator.

Whoo! That's awesome and amazingly cool, Sam. :D

Hiya, So, this isn't bad. It definitetly kept me interested in reading, but I feel like the execution could be a lot better, especially since we've seen this sort of ...

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Hiya, Excuse me if this is a little rusty, as I'm not that great at reviewing poetry. Before I talk about the poem as a whole, I wanted to mention ...

Hiya, Welcome to YWS! Are you enjoying it so far? I've never been a fan of prologues for a few reasons, mostly because they are rarely necessary. If you put ...

The related poem of this story; Some of us are rich and have plenty of money to spend. So much that it becomes meaningless-- they can get everything and anything ...

Click here to view the poem . Your story is about a house cleaner in New York e-mailing their mom. from Matthew Rice to Kelly Rice Davidson Subject: Hey Hi ...

Hiya, This is okay. There a lot of really strong points to this story. However, it doesn't feel as if it's as good as it could be. Although I do ...

Hiya, I really, really like this story. It's captivating and although we know there is no hope for the characters, I'm still hooked. I want to continue and see what ...

Hi again Cali! So, I don't have that much to say because you've made this new draft much, much better then the original. The story feels a lot more coherent ...

This is ooooold. I've trashed the piece for the now, but I most likely will come back to it later and completely rewrite it. Thank you for your comments, though.

Luke He was here. Actually outside putting the skills he was learning to use, not cramped up in tight desks for hours listening to boring lectures. It was very, very ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Ellie; it's a pleasure to meet you. High School? Me too! I'm a freshman. Do you get to take any cool classes, or not ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I really like your username. ^^ ultraviolet got the basics and other cool features of this site, but if you're still lost, feel free to ...