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Hey again Red. So, I pretty much agree with wickedwonder. The father just doesn't feel realistic in this little snippet at all. I can understand him being mad, but calling ...

Hello. For the most part I agree with with wickedwonder. Alright, so your MC may be going through a rough time right now. But her friends and family are just ...

Hey! So, okay. I thought that this was a really neat little story. It's definitely not bad, and I especially love your language and imagery and the way that you ...

Hi, Before I begin the review, I just wanted to mention something minor about grammar. Make sure you run a spell check through your work before posting it! I noticed ...

Hi! So, I think this was a cute little poem. It's definitely well-written and very simple, which is the kind of narrative that I really like. You've covered an idea ...

Edited 9/25/10 Fixed up a few grammatical errors and updated to include some more recent changes.

Hello. If I could describe this story in one word, it would be emptiness. There's not really much that I feel or am attached to throughout the course of this. ...

I'm hoping I can do 5.

Could you review this poem for me? Thanks so much. ^^

have you heard of the mile to heaven, the gilded pathway through clouds and stars; the journey that all of us take in the end. the mile to heaven that's ...

Two minor things before I begin the review. First, make sure you run over your work with a spell-check. It looked fine for the most part, but I noticed you ...

Hi, Wicked! Before I start, just a few notes about script formatting.Whenever you have stage directions in a chunk of dialogue, you should always go to a new line for ...

Name: Lisa Mary Miller Age: 17 Crime: Alcohol, marijuana and tobacco use, resisting arrest Appearance: Lisa is 5'4 with an extremely thin, curvy body. Her skin is pale with dark ...

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Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory (1971) - This film is just incredible. It's a magical, whimsical ride, with great acting, story and an ending that will make you smile. ...