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Galerius and Prokaryote.

Hi, So this piece didn't really make feel anything. It didn't because I didn't really feel anything for your character, seeing as how you don't really develop her well. Alright, ...

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Lisa Miller | Monday, 7:46 AM | Girls Breakfast Hall Lisa had never liked the inspections the warden gave on Mondays. They were stupid and boring and they took far ...

Hi. First, please proofread your story to check for grammatical and spelling errors before it is posted. It shouldn't be hard; if you use Microsoft Word or Open Office there ...

Sam! You have to tell me when you post these things so that I can review them. You know I will, right? For the most part, I agree with Hannah ...

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Hey Kyl. :) Could you review this for me: It's just a little flash that I wrote (In general fiction). Thanks!

Rosalie knows what day it is. She smells it in the air and senses it around her, from the fresh blanket of snow outside, to songs like Rudolph the Red-Nosed ...

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Sam! Hi! I told you I would review these, and here I am! I really, really like these; you're such a talented drawer. #1 I like some of your shading ...

This looks seriously awesome! I like Griff's structure, and I like the idea of symbols to represent various members. Unfortunately I'm terrible artist, otherwise I'd love to help out. If ...

Hi Kit, So, I thought this was cute. It had a nice flow and rhythm to it, but I think it could be better. What little imagery that you have ...

A story I've been working on, Into the Depths, deals a lot with the navy. Midway through the story, one of the characters is recruited to it. I tried looking ...