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Welcome to YWS, Hazel! You won't be disappointed--this is really is an amazing site. Send me a PM if you need anything! :) Hope to see you around!

Hey, Lava. So, I really liked this piece. It had a very interesting premise and I liked your word choice and pace throughout. For something so short we really get ...

If the grammar is incredibly poor or there are other glaring technical issues, I will mention those first. Then, I will say what I liked about the piece. Then, I'll ...

Well it really depends how many issues I want to address and how much good I've seen in the piece that I want to bring up. So, it takes anywhere ...

Hi, Sweeney! Welcome to YWS! :) First, I want to say something about the formatting of this piece. Right now, it's hard to read since it's all one big chunk ...

Heh, this is so cute. I wish I could have done cool projects like this in Art Class! The coolest thing I remember doing was clay sculptures of food in ...

Hmm, this is an interesting piece. The whole setting and landscape really reminds me of an African safari. I think your coloring and shading is strong and it's cool how ...

Lisa Miller | 9:19 AM | The Football Pitch Lisa snorted. Seriously, how full of it was this guy? The idiotic grin on his face made her want to slap ...

Lisa Miller | 9:17 AM | The Football Pitch "He wants to see you," Chance said, pointing his arm toward the edge of the pitch. Lisa narrowed her eyes and ...

Hi, Emilie! :D Welcome to YWS! I love your name and the way it's spelled too; it's very pretty and unique. Web design and animation? That's super cool! What kind ...

Lisa Miller | 8:58 AM | The Classroom After a grueling hour of breakfast, class was finally called. Lisa and the girl hadn't talked much, instead simply gazing up at ...

Mine is DarthFleur!

For being last month's featured member! :)

Lisa Miller | 7:50 AM | Girls Breakfast Hall Lisa had only realized that the girl was there after she had sat down. She was alarmed, but also very surprised. ...

I got my braces off today. :D