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Re: Nationality Headcount at YWS
Filipino: 1 Scottish: 1 English: 1 American: 1
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: Drawing - Isha (LP's contest)
Hey, Scar. Aww, this is such a cute picture. I'm confused, though, as to whether this was supposed to be realistic or a cartoon-like drawing. It kind of looks like ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: Hurt Me
Hey Kat. My main issue with this poem, I think, is that there isn't much in way of poetry as far as this piece goes.You definitely have some interesting ideas, ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: How big should chapters be?
There isn't a really set amount, but generally, the shorter it is, the more reviews that you'll get on it. I try to keep my posts under 2000 words. 1000-2000 ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: First Roller Coaster
Hey Pazey. So, this was cute. It kind of reminded me of a short story that I wrote a few weeks back. However, it could definitely be much better then ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: Random Recent Photos.
So, these are good. I'm not going to deny that. You capture these water droplets in such a surreal and beautiful way that it's hard to believe that this are ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Two Weeks with the Kindle
I've actually been thinking more and more about getting a Kindle over the past couple of weeks. It just seems a lot more efficient to me, and if I got ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: The Never Ending Story 1
Allie Brown Allie frowned. The vortex; she remembered it being brought up in the lecture on Tuesday. Apparently, it had originated somewhere in Britain before the Norman invasion of 1066, ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: The Never Ending Story 1
Allie Brown It was 11:15 PM, and Allie could feel her eyelids drooping. How on earth was she going to read twelve more pages of the reading and write the ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: Haunting Matty (scary story contest)
Saaam. :D Here is your promised review. So I thought this story was really cool and creepy. You had good ideas and really play up the atmosphere. The last line ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: Rach-and-Ribbit Reviews, Inc.
Hey Rach, could you review this flash for me? It's called Heaven and it's in Historical Fiction.
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: Heaven
AN: This is a quick little flash that I did. It's very rough and is in desperate need of editing, so please, be as harsh as possible. Also, this is ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Phoenix: The Fire Bird (Contest Entry)
Hey Ninja! Sorry this took so long. Anyway, here is your promised review. You got third place simply because of how fun this piece is. While it's not the most ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: A Letter to Pedantic Americans
In regards to switching to the metric system, it probably wouldn't work. In America, we have a great deal of people of people, all of whom are very dependent on ...
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [5]
Banned for having two orange stars!
Oct 18, 2010
