Elinor

Awesome! I have one short story that I'll work on polishing over the next couple days before I submit it. ^^

Lisa Contrary to what others might have thought, Lisa's favorite part of the whole day was the time she was able to spend in her cell. Why? Because she didn't ...

I will definitely be listening!

Hi, Quibbler! Welcome to YWS (Or, more appropriately, welcome back). I'm Ellie. Steampunk? That's so cool. I've heard a lot about the genre but I don't really know if I've ...

AN: Hi guys! So, this is a rewrite of I'm Coming Home for Christmas , a short story I posted on the site a while ago. A lot of people ...

You could do a number of things. Titling the chapters with specific character names would work! Also, another thing you could is try writing in diary format, and just have ...

Hannah The whole experience was mind-numbing, and too amusement park like (with the shaking, the lack of light and Kisa's screams) to seem real. But Hannah had to keep reminding ...

Firearris also looks like she's stomping on my head!

Hannah Hannah had just fallen asleep when the guards had awoken her and informed her that they had taken in a little eleven-year old girl who had just lost her ...

Hi Pea! :) So, these are really cute. I love how you capture sort of a Disney-esque style with these pictures, and they're better then I could ever do; they're ...

Sur

It's your title. You can do whatever you want with it. Though, if you do have a title that's more stylistic, better to do something that's related and should give ...

Hannah Hannah clutched her pink fleece blanket and took a sip of coffee from her thermos which was left over from dinner. It was lukewarm, but Hannah didn't care--it still ...

To a certain extent, I do like it, and I think it adds to the characters in ways. Like, for example, if you had a character who was from the ...

Hey, Mickey! So, Lumi's given you the basic run-down of where things are and such, so I just thought that I'd just say hi and welcome you to YWS! It's ...