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  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Golden Canvasses

    Shine A single, perfect gem shines from the dust Refracting the joyful morning sunbeams Bending the light to perfect its beauty. I wish nothing more then to pick it up, ...

    Apr 9, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Golden Canvasses

    Thanks, Alliyah! I'll try to keep it up.

    Apr 9, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Golden Canvasses

    April 8th's poem was inspired partly by stress, and partly by my brother's poorly tuned guitar. Some haikus express beauty, others ugliness, and this one's the latter. Snap Stretched out ...

    Apr 8, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Golden Canvasses

    Today's poem is my very first attempt at blank verse poetry. I think it turned out well enough for a newbie! Silver Dreams Silver dreams on shattered wings go flying ...

    Apr 7, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Golden Canvasses

    Today's poem, another haiku, was inspired by a peculiar ringing in my ears last night. I hope you like it! Moonsong The sound of moonlight Angelic voices ringing Her song ...

    Apr 6, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Golden Canvasses

    Aw, thanks Liberty!

    Apr 6, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Golden Canvasses

    Today is Palm Sunday, and the coming days mark Holy Week. This will be the first time for as long as I can remember that I didn't go to church ...

    Apr 5, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: i swear all the birds will live until the end

    Two more good poems! But... isn't dark cyan the same color as teal?

    Apr 4, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Golden Canvasses

    So much déjà vu lately, I just had to write a poem about it. Anyway, here's my poem for day four of NaPo! Stagnant Time Time is spinning on a ...

    Apr 4, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: i swear all the birds will live until the end

    Oh, I love that last line of poem 4! Also, great illustrations!

    Apr 3, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Golden Canvasses

    It's a beautiful rainy day today. Here's my poem for April 3rd, this one started out as a much longer poem, but I felt it worked better as a Haiku. ...

    Apr 3, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: April Madness 2020

    Is there room for one more? If so, count me in!

    Apr 2, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Golden Canvasses

    Also, bonus poem I started last night and honed during the poetry jam: Dripping Words Simple words drip from my mouth Like water from the ancient mountain Trickling, flowing through ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Golden Canvasses

    Ever write a poem that you didn't mean to write, but has a perfectly cohesive theme anyway? Here's today's poem, Broken Lines . Broken Lines Broken lines on aged faces ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Cluster of poems

    Nice job, especially considering it's your first ever! Keep up the good work!

    Apr 1, 2020


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