Eleriann

hey again, i like the direction your keeping but your characters all react really dramatically it seems and possibly sometimes they dont need to be so... well dramatic i guess. ...

I can gaze into the mirror For hours, each and every day, Trying to tell her she’s beautiful, But the words just stay locked away. Behind the barrier Of self-esteem ...

Hey im really enjoying your story, the idea is really good and the characters seem quite well thought but alot of the time your experession seems a bit off and ...

I’m standing on a tiny platform, High above the world. Jump? A trapeze bar hangs So close, yet… Jump? Some days I can reach out, And touch the bar, Just ...

yeaahh im not really a fan of that line either really but it sounded better than the other lines i came up with i meant that like when they'd been ...

hey i really like this, i think youve depicted the nervousness of the speaker and the way the mother picks up on it very well and i love the ending.. ...

Sometimes I feel like I’m too big for my own skin Like I’m bursting out And if I fell out, I’d never get back in Then again a lot of ...