Elephant

this is to go with my other story which until this point has been titled: new project, title pending but now has a name: Firséd. This is for Areida because ...

Thanks man, it took so long to type up as I can't read my own handwriting. sad...isn't it. Part 4 will be up soon, as well as a companion piece ...

Ahh.. thanks for clarifying. EL

Whooo! Finally typed it all up. This is quite a long chapter, it is 7 pages exact on Word in 10pt font, I even broke up the chapter. So here ...

ARGG... I just posted a lenghty response and the site logged off on me... err lets try this again. The next chapter which will be up pronto, defines this as ...

The guy who hands Kyle the book is supposed to be vague, *wink wink* EL

Thanks for the welcome. :D I am not unfortunately a pink flying elephant, though I wish I was. EL

Welcome Flo! EL

you do laundry? okay strike that comment... they're black, they will only get blacker, and that's why as my sister Lori would say God invented 'smell good stuff'.

Miss Ari here's your 10 The first one is nice and romanticly/idealy inclined. The second is based on truth.

I never look at the keyboard, maybe that's why people think I can't spell. I just took at typing test...104 words per min, my fingers are flying.... :lol: but normally ...

CS Lewis is great, Miss Ari. About Jake, are you talking about Kyle, cause I think you may have gotten them confused or at least I am confused here...not to ...

Thanks Niobe, I'll be the first one to admit I suck at grammer, thats what friends are for, right? The purpose of this chapter was for character developement, so that's ...

Here's the next chapter, I know it's kind of short, but the next one is longer, I think :wink: All comments and crits welcome. Rated again for language... EL ------------- ...

Thank you both. Twilight - actually it was the first one that came to mind, I wanted to use one of the books out of the series but I didn't ...