Elentari

So this is the first chapter. Go for it, and crit as hard as you like. Chapter I - Captured Cela sat straight up in bed, her heart was racing. ...

Okay, there is one reason why there is no action in this. I will tell you a secret... It's a dream. That is the reason I have it very descriptive. ...

Short and Sweet, I haven't posted in a LONG time, this was my NaNoWriMo story, btw, and it totals around 1o,ooo words. I wrote the entire thing in eight days, ...

thanks, I know it's short, but I have yet to figure out loooooong chapters, so you'll have to deal for the time being. A diffrent book I started is longer ...

Chapter I Meetings “Steon? Stee--eon?!” A voice questioned pulling me out of my ‘sleep’. “What” I yawned in surprise, expecting to see the gruff hangman bringing me back to the ...

O.o I get it!!! will do!

Let's get on with it, It's done, and edited to my best ability. Thanks for all the great reviews, and here you go... Chapter I Meetings “Steon? Stee--eon?!” A voice ...

Thank you for the Crit. My sense of Mystery was intentional, as I needed to keep it going, and make the prologue longer XD. Everything clears up after the first ...

Prologue Death Steon walked up to the hangman’s noose. This was it,he thought. No more could he walk down the gravel streets, pretending nothing was wrong. No more could he ...

Wow. This is really good. I just saw "LEO" in the title, and thought "Hey, I'm a Leo, and this has a cool title." You're definitely a good writer, and ...

nancy Yi Fan wrote sword bird, and published sword quest at age... umm... like, 14, I think she's sixteen now... I've done one review, have

I absolutely love your sense of mystery, it's so good, and thrilling. You created great passages, and pieces in your work. Now, I can't correct you grammar, or spelling (Sorry, ...

Well, I write fantasy, and have written two short stories, one that sucks, and I'm working on the sequel to another. The good one is called Star-Flight, and that's what ...

Hello, I'm a writer, (wait, you probably guessed that) and decided to join another forum. I'm a member of Impulsive writers and Inheritance Forums. I'm Thirteen, and live in Minnesota, ...