Elentari

Okay, the last and final chapter. Now NOTE: I NEED to edit a certain death scene, or all of them, just so you know, I do know that!!! Any comments ...

Okay, I like it a lot!!! xD, so you're a vampire story person too huh? That could explain why you were attracted to my work, and I like yours too!!!! ...

Preface - Dreamed The sky was dark, and the mists blanketed the narrow valley, rendering the world invisible until nothing but a white field remained. Cela pulled the cowl of ...

Chapter VIII - Planned The last days past in preparations and planning. It was decided that At the dawn of the next day, someone would have to set out to ...

All right!!! Thank you, both of you! I'll be looking through this once I get to editing these chapters!!!

Chapter VII - Greeted Cela squinted as her eyes adjusted to the dark lighting in the cabin. She wiped her feet off on the old welcome mat, long past its ...

Okay, just one thing, ha ha, I still have to edit all of this!!! So that will all be in consideration once I get their. I'll put up the next ...

Chapter VI - Attacked Cela shivered in the cold night air. It was their fifth night sleeping under the wide open sky, but Cela just couldn't get used to it. ...

Chapter V - Allied Yet again Cela's mouth fell agape. Bryn had more secrets about her than Cela had realized. "Is that how he knows?" Cela said in awe. "Yes," ...

Well, the rest will come up later, try tomorrow night, but I have to say.... Cela has no fear of dying, I must say now. You will see this in ...

okay, I like the concept, and with some editing, you could get really far. The only thing I really have to say is that like Elinor said, it was a ...

Chapter IV - Escaped Terrin crashed through the door. Bryn coward in his shadow. "What the hell have you done Cela?" he yelled. Cela gulped. "What do you mean Terrin?" ...

Chapter III - Saved Terrin thrust Cela into her new room. It was up in a tower, a medium sized circular space. Rich red and gold brocaded carpet covered the ...

First of all, make sure you read the first chapter/preface, or this won't make sense. Second, the writing isn't perfect, as I wrote it hurriedly for NaNoWriMo. *** Chapter II ...

Hopefully you will all think the story get's better. I wrote the beginning around a year before the rest, but didn't have time to fix it before my hurried eight ...