EleanorRigby

Thanks, Stella! I'm going to re-draft this part of it before I post up the second part. I'll keep these things in mind and read that article when I have ...

Thanks so much! I'll do some editing and such later on, I think.

I'm thinking about turning this into a novel, but I'm not quite sure yet. I have never gone back and edited it, so keep that in mind. I've really enjoyed ...

Everything around sounds the finest. But, everything sounds in its worst, That sort of confuses me. I'm not really sure what you're trying to say here. I'm assuming that it's ...

I loved it. I could really feel your emotion and it seemed very interesting, almost as if it could be a story. Good job.

I liked them all a lot, but the quality/reflection in the second one could have been better. Overall, great job. The third one was absolutely enthralling. I loved it.

Someone posted a link to it on the NaNoWriMo forums.

I thought this was a beautiful poem. I believe it flows really well and is very clear and descriptive. I love it when literary works can give me a good ...

I liked it a lot. I could sort of picture what you were describing in my head as you went along telling the story in the poem. Like Flower~Child said, ...

I really loved it and could truly feel the emotions you were conveying in your words. It was sweet and innocent, yet grown-up, raw, and mature all at the same ...

1.) Pretty good! Lovely flowers. I though it'd be better if there was brighter light, but I know you can't do anything about that. So...good job! 2.) Absolutely gorgeous! I'm ...

The pictures were absolutely lovely! Ballet shoes are so pretty. :)

I thought this was good. I liked your other poem about the star better, but considering this was your first poem, it was really good. Nice job!

Although I don't speak Spanish (I'm taking my first course of it in the fall), and I'm sure it sounds lovely in the original version, I thought it sounded just ...

This is just something I sat down and wrote late one evening. I didn't know what I was writing until the moment I put my pen to the page. It's ...