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Re: Unearth, intro
@ DSF6647 thanks, your review was really helpful. Yeah, I guess I could restructure some of these sentences, some of the things you pointed out are purely intentional, to show ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Victoria Hava and The Stone of evil
You still need a little work in clarity. I think that's where you missed it.
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Twins.
Excellent piece with enough clarity. I love your way with words
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Unearth, intro
The land was all just rocky sand that surrounded me, there was no grass in sight, there was no sign of green. But, that afternoon had brought with it a ...
Sep 2, 2011