El-lyncho

It's been cut apart.. :| didn't notice that. It was all there in the preview so.. :S

Foreverdark ‘til eternal blackness rules all heart, ‘til foreverdark doth choke our heart. Nocturnis In the midst of the great maelstrom of stars which cling to the outer spreads of ...

Fairly short, Olive skinned, Handlebar moustache and a pet Alsatian?

I like the consistency of the order of each line, it gives this slightly broken up poem a feel to it. However, it seemed to be the main thing that ...

Probably been mentioned, but best tips I can give from thinking about how I write: -Music can help stimulate ideas, but it tends to hinder you if it is too ...

An overlooked small seed at best, planted subtlety in my chest, slowly growing, I not knowing. Not long on the small shoot bloomed, and slowly buds of passion groomed, my ...

I like this.. fairly simple overall, but powerful. I really like I gaze above and look at myself, reflected by lonely grey clouds. Not so sure about repetition of 'realise' ...

[Wow] :wink: Great poem, although it seems to slightly stray from the subject nearer the end from what I can see.. The unlucky one’s stayed to Needs to be 'ones' ...

Waking to silence, the dim light cascading over my room, casting a flickering shadow of feathery clouds I tiptoe down, out into the bleak wilds of the sleepy world, intrigued ...

It's definitely a great time for ideas and fun, but in my opinion overall it's slightly stupid.. It's derived from an age old tradition concerning superstitions, and yet we still ...

Have to say the pen. Pens (Quills or writing of some form if you want to be pedantic) have written out many religious books e.g the bible. Now because of ...

Flowing fingers stroke his skin, dancing neatly over, flouncy leaves, swiftly seized, swinging to and hither, Passengers of foam and ferns, he carries to and fro, with drips and drops, ...

That poem is definitely very powerful and seems to illustrates the point well of the unmovability of a strong feeling (i.e. love). The first time I read it through I ...

It's quite a sweet poem overall, could possibly be improved by more powerful language as it seems to slightly let down the overall feel. Oh, no she crossed the finish ...