Ego

“If you value your lives, you will leave now. The man’s gravely voice echoed through the street. I planted my palms on the ground, pushing myself to my feet. Looking ...

Ah, thank you for pointing that out Valor--I'll correct that in my next run through. DQ, I was reading about Artemis Entreri, Drizzt Do'Urden, and Salvatore about the time you ...

hey, a decade for an elf is nothing--plus, he's a waywatcher, so he's used to being alone for long periods of time and wandering over the land he's been chosen ...

"Without your help, I fear we would have been lost," Marreck said the the Elven Lord. Felthyn nodded grimly. "The orcs are gaining power. They've set up a stronghold in ...

"Aye, we have healers," the man's voice was soft and melodic, but his words carried the same weight and fierceness as Marrek's. He was obviously a leader. He reached a ...

Man, Bob Salvatore is my hero yo. I met the guy at Wondercon 2004. Waywatcher comes from some old Warhammer class..I just stole the name :p

It totally does! Squall Lionheart and Seifer are from Final Fantasy VIII.... I thought the action was a bit choppy, but overall it looked good to me.

“No! I mean me and Sophie! No, I could never do such a thing, I love you two much to hurt you, my dear!” two should be too. That's all ...

Jeez homie.....we're gonna have a chat me and you here pretty quick lol

Thanks all. Snoink: the third person perspective is actually necessary to the plotline. I'm not trying to avoid anything at all, don't worry about that--rather, I'm trying to reveal something ...

“Dude, that party was awesome!” Michael said for the third time that night, his speech slurred by a few too many beers at a local kegger party. He stumbled along ...

Good call--I love making up crap for stories lol

I've got nothing, Snoinky--looks great, you've got this thing covered... I feel bad that I can't some up with anything, lol... --Dono

Thank you all--I changed "The light just begun to shine" (originally supposed to be "The light HAS just begun to shine"...) to "The light begins to shine," as per suggestion ...

UPDATED: New description of Mike included, as well as new material near the bottom (labeled) “Dude, that party was awesome!” Michael said for the third time that night, his speech ...