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Attempting to do two perspectives, in Emergence; "Hunter's," and "not Hunter's"--First Person and Third Person, respectively.

I once had a teacher that tried to find a reason to give me anything but an A. She failed miserably. It was funny, because she had the class each ...

I've no problem with either. Both have their place, obviously.

Teehee, thanks. I try XD

Detail is key. Everything has a purpose. If it doesn't...make it.

Think EVERYTHING through. If it doesn't make sense, scrap it or fix it. Remember, the Laws of Physics still apply in a fantasy setting, they can merely be bent by ...

That's always tough, Cloud. I recently started editting and continuing my modern fantasy, Emergence, after a year's break. Hopefully it'll take you less time to get back to it :)

True dat.

Depends. If it were just me getting bitten by a random dinosaur, if I wasn't badly maimed, I'd be totally jazzed--I just got bitten by a freakin' DINOSAUR. Plus.....chicks dig ...

Make him a zombie. ...what? You said he didn't want to die....

I am, first and foremost, a boyfriend. Then I'm a writer. Then a gamer. Then a nerd. Yeah, I like writing, video gaming, pen and paper gaming (you know, dungeons ...

Translation from all of the above: Try it, Snoink.

For FREAK? For the Unicorn story? I think it really depends on ther storyline, and how vague the beginning is and how interesting the ending is. What are you working ...

I disagree. Both your examples are inefficient. The first utilizes far too many commas and is much too choppy to be read smoothly, and the second is just boring . ...

Gotta agree with Dusky here; boring is boring, not fun. SLOW, however, can be fun. Nobody wants to read a boring chapter...it's tedious and, well, BORING.